Voice, the Novel’s Secret Sauce

We have to admit, novelists envy filmmakers, and for good reason. Film and television are the primary means of story consumption; a picture is worth a thousand words, and a moving picture is more accessible than a million words. Every novelist and their dog wants their book adapted to film, because then people would know who they are and actually pay them some mind (and money.)

This film envy leads to a lot of problems with modern fiction — overdone descriptions, hard-to-follow fight scenes, and dull, lifeless narration, among other things. Emperor Ponders goes into much greater detail about this issue here.

However, novels have a secret sauce that no visual medium could hope to match: VOICE.

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Anime’s Secret Sauce

UPDATE: Misha Burnett responds.

I would always watch anime and think, “I can’t draw, but I could sling words like anyone’s business.” Then I would sit down and write a story, but I would always get the feeling that something was missing. Why didn’t my work have the spark that my favorite animated stories had? Was it because of visuals? Was it because I wasn’t good enough?

No. It was because I didn’t embrace the mythic.

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Talking Shining Tomorrow With Jon Del Arroz

Yesterday, I spoke live on YouTube with Jon Del Arroz, the Leading Hispanic Voice in Science Fiction, about Shining Tomorrow and about the PulpRev. It’s only about half an hour long, but it’s well worth the listen.

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Humanity Doesn’t Deserve Nice Things

A while back, I wrote a post about why I disliked the post-apocalyptic genre. In short, I find the genre bleak and hopeless in spite of its promise of social rebirth and its destruction of social complexity.

But friend of the blog Misha Burnett pointed out another aspect of the genre, one I think is very important:

Over on Twitter you described the genre as “misery porn”, but the kind of thing I am talking about is more of “guilt porn”. There is an assumption–often stately flatly, but sometimes only implied–that the cataclysm was deserved. A nuclear war caused by imperialist warmongers or an ecological disaster caused by greedy corporations, for example.

Those kinds of stories are anti-civilization. The villains are usually the ones trying to rebuild some kind of structure, usually military or religious (or both) in nature. The good guys (such as they are) tend to be parasitic scavengers fulfilling some version of a “all the bad rich people are dead and we get their stuff” fantasy.

Even if the “good guys” win, there is no sense that they intend to do anything other than root through the trash of the old world until all the canned beans are gone. It’s the juvenile nihilism of trust fund brats who can’t think past their next drink or their next screw.

The main idea is that the post-apocalypse is meant to put humanity in its place and punish it for its so-called arrogance.

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Characters Must Be Written Unrealistically

Yesterday, friend of the blog Daddy Warpig wrote a post on his Facebook that used the continued occurrence of male/female interchangeability in pop culture to critique modern character writing more generally (Warpig’s post is below the fold.)

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Notice of Side Story Cancellation

I will release Shining Tomorrow Volume 1: Shadow Heart in May of this year. That has not changed. The launch will proceed AS SCHEDULED.

However, in my New Years’ post, I mentioned a side story that was written to accompany Volume 1. I regret to inform all of you that the publication of that side story is hereby canceled indefinitely since I feel that it’s not up to quality compared to the main novel. I apologize if anyone is disappointed by this news.

Rather than spending time revising a bonus extra, I’ve decided to focus exclusively on bringing the core series of four books to life.

I look forward to showing you all the world of the Shining Tomorrow.

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My Thoughts on Princess Mononoke

WARNING: Spoilers below the fold; it’s the only way to talk about the movie in depth.

I’ve heard so much about the films of Hayao Miyazaki, but I had only seen Spirited Away prior to this one (and that was a long time ago.) Out of curiosity, I decided to watch his 1997 movie Princess Mononoke, which I remember the media speaking highly of when I was a kid. At the end of it, I came away quite impressed. Before reading anyone else’s thoughts on the movie, I decided to get my own thoughts down.

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GPT-2’s Possible Threat to Authors

UPDATE: ZDNet shows some skepticism about GPT-2’s abilities without downplaying its significance.

UPDATE 2: Some sample outputs from the GPT-2 software can be found here. Suffice it to say, novelists’ jobs aren’t in any danger at all, though there are some pretty good examples in there.

UPDATE 3: Scott Alexander of Slate Star Codex shares some insightful thoughts.

UPDATE 4: Hugh Zhang of The Gradient puts this accomplishment into perspective.

As a novelist, it’s easy to get worried about what artificial intelligence, or AI, can do. Everything from movement, to vision, to the game of Go (long regarded as difficult for computers) has been done well by AI and is set to get better and better. This raises the question of what it means for those who do creative work, such as artists and novelists. On the artistic side, a program called StyleGAN creates very good-looking anime faces as well as equally good-looking realistic faces. It’s not good enough to generate whole images in a variety of poses and appearances, but it makes one think what might be possible with time. As for text, that software don’t do so well.

But GPT-2 does.

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Choose Your Circles Carefully, or Why Larry Correia’s Books Don’t Get Hate-Mobbed

Amélie Wen Zhao (Photo by Crystal Wong)

UPDATE: Benjamin Cheah responds.

UPDATE: Misha Burnett responds. See the end of this post.

FULL DISCLOSURE: I am part of a right-wing literary circle called the Conservative-Libertarian Fiction Alliance.

A few days ago, YA (Young Adult fiction) Twitter claimed another victim, this time a Chinese woman: Amélie Wen Zhao, pictured right. She was set to publish her debut novel, Blood Heir, in June, but when early reviewers accused her of racism against blacks, a mob sprung up to condemn her and her book. In response to the backlash, Zhao canceled delayed the release indefinitely and apologized to the public for writing it.

Rod Dreher of The American Conservative has a more detailed writeup, as does Alexandra Alter of the New York Times. (And to Slate’s credit, they find the racism charges questionable at best.)

Like Laurie Forest and Laura Moriarty before her, she got hate-mobbed on Twitter for alleged racism, often by people who didn’t even read the book. Like Keira Drake, she publicly surrendered to the mob — Drake by rewriting her book, and Zhao by withdrawing hers.

But there’s an interesting pattern here: despite the well-known bias against conservatives in publishing, these hate mobs rarely happen to right-wing authors, and they almost never happen when a book is released. Virtually every hate-mobbed author has been on the political Left.

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In Culture, Be the Change You Seek

In a now-deleted tweet, fellow blogger Alexandru Constantin made a comment like this regarding culture (this isn’t an exact quote; I’m going off of memory):

Be cooler than the opposition. Men on the right need to drop the anime, stop touching themselves, and fucking lift. Complaining about SJWs, comics, and Star Wars is lame.

There’s a lot to unpack here. While I agree with him overall, I disagree on some of the details.

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