Good Critiques from Google Plus

As you all may have heard, Google plans to shut down Google Plus in April of this year, forcing its users to migrate to places like MeWe and other social media platforms. However, PulpRev-affiliated people had pleanty of good discussions on Google Plus, and I would hate to see them be lost to the ether.

Thus, I have archived a few of those discussions, and linked them below.

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2019: A New Path

2018 is in the past now, and 2019 is here. This new year will bring new challenges, but also new opportunities. However, now’s not the time to take a break; things started in 2018 must be seen through to completion.

There is one major goal and one minor goal for the year. The major goal is the publication of Shining Tomorrow. The minor goal is further progress on a new installment of Sword & Flower, this one called Sword & Flower ~BRILLIANT~.

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She Is Now Shoujo Crimson (Also, the Anime Informing Shining Tomorrow)

Shoujo Crimson (Illustrator: Jalen Myles Crymes)

I’ve done some thinking on the main character of Shining Tomorrow. Using the previous name for the character, Shoujo Red, might be cutting it a little too close regarding trademark. While Shoujo Red isn’t trademarked, it’s too much like Shonen Red, an in-universe fictional character from Sega’s Sakura Wars franchise (who is actually played by a woman.)

As a result of this, her name is now Shoujo Crimson, and all references to her have been altered to reflect that change.

But I have more to say as well. (Spoilers for Gundam Wing ahead.)

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Remakers Are Fans of the Brand

This morning, I found out that the classic anime Saint Seiya, also known as Knights of the Zodiac, is getting a remake by Netflix. Though I know next to nothing about the franchise, I know that it is beloved by many a fan.

Then we learn that the producer turned one of the main cast, an effeminate male named Andromeda Shun, into a female to “modernize” the story, and it went over as badly as you’d expect with the trailer getting ratio’d. Bounding into Comics has the gory details.

This whole fiasco has me thinking of a video I saw once, comparing “fans of the franchise” to “fans of the brand.” Originally mentioned in the context of Star Wars fandom, Franchisers and Branders (my terminology) differ in how they engage with a given intellectual property.

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Go to Determinist Hell

UPDATE: Alexander Hellene responds.

(Inspired by Brian Niemeier’s recent post on free will.)

At first, we learned that the Sun does not revolve around Earth, but Earth around the sun. Then we learned that the home of humanity is nothing but an insignificant corner of a vast galaxy. Then we learned that man came not from deities, but from apes, rendering man no less an animal than a bird or a dog. Then, with the advance of genetics, neuroscience, and information technology, we learn that man does not possess free will. All his behaviors and actions are a product of genetics and neurology. Far from a special snowflake with an undying soul created by a magic sky fairy, man is a moist robot, no different from a laptop except for his architecture.

That is the biological determinist narrative, tailor-made to beat people down and crush their spirits.

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Shining Tomorrow Historical Lore (Part 5 — Finale)

This series of posts will detail the backstory of the setting of my upcoming novel, Shining Tomorrow. This backstory is not needed to understand the novel; it is only posted as a supplementary bonus.

Part 1: The Late United States Period (1914-1950)
Part 2: The Norman Regime and the MacGruder Coup (1951-1970)
Part 3: The Rise of the White Nationalist Movement (1971-2015)
Part 4: World War III (2015-2020)
Part 5: Morning in America (2021-Present)

Flag of the North American Federation (2021-Present)

Morning in America (2021-Present)

2021: The National Politburo installs Ike Lerner as President, but the Shining Tomorrow Party’s power has been greatly reduced, with the Japanese government having far more say.

2024: Tech entrepreneur Lemuel Foxman founds FriendSeek, a social media site intended to help people find friends and family separated by the war. It is the beginning of social media on a wide scale.

2025: The Ku Klux Klan remains active in the NAF. Though they shift tactics to organized crime, they still retain their focus on assassinations and acts of terrorism.

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Shining Tomorrow Historical Lore (Part 4)

This series of posts will detail the backstory of the setting of my upcoming novel, Shining Tomorrow. This backstory is not needed to understand the novel; it is only posted as a supplementary bonus.

Part 1: The Late United States Period (1914-1950)
Part 2: The Norman Regime and the MacGruder Coup (1951-1970)
Part 3: The Rise of the White Nationalist Movement (1971-2015)
Part 4: World War III (2015-2020)
Part 5: Morning in America (2021-Present)

“No, Andrea, you can get through this…just ignore the flashbacks, it’s only a paper…it’s not like it mentions my family getting blown up…deep breaths. All right. Now to reprint the page.”

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Shining Tomorrow Historical Lore (Part 3)

This series of posts will detail the backstory of the setting of my upcoming novel, Shining Tomorrow. This backstory is not needed to understand the novel; it is only posted as a supplementary bonus.

Part 1: The Late United States Period (1914-1950)
Part 2: The Norman Regime and the MacGruder Coup (1951-1970)
Part 3: The Rise of the White Nationalist Movement (1971-2015)
Part 4: World War III (2015-2020)
Part 5: Morning in America (2021-Present)

The Betsy Ross flag, used as a symbol by Jasper Lowell’s white nationalist rebels. It will eventually become the national flag of the Middle American States.

The Rise of the White Nationalist Movement (1971-2015)

1971: The National Politburo reconvenes and appoints Owen Stanton as new President of the NAF. With the formerly dispossessed middle and upper classes in charge again, the Shining Tomorrow Party adopts a right-wing stance to get rid of socialism forever. Japan establishes permanent bases in the NAF; people welcome this because the Japanese Army ended socialism.

[Mrs. K: Americans did not immediately warm up to the Japanese; it takes two decades for them to see the Empire of Japan as a welcome bulwark against socialism, and later, against white supremacy.]

1981: As the NAF’s economy expands, the government passes the Greater East Asia Migration Act, opening the door to free migration from mainland Japan, which was greatly overcrowded and had a birthrate of about 4.11.

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Shining Tomorrow Historical Lore (Part 2)

This series of posts will detail the backstory of the setting of my upcoming novel, Shining Tomorrow. This backstory is not needed to understand the novel; it is only posted as a supplementary bonus.

Part 1: The Late United States Period (1914-1950)
Part 2: The Norman Regime and the MacGruder Coup (1951-1970)
Part 3: The Rise of the White Nationalist Movement (1971-2015)
Part 4: World War III (2015-2020)
Part 5: Morning in America (2021-Present)

Flag of the North American Federation (1950-2020)

The Norman Regime and the MacGruder Coup (1951-1970)

1951: The People’s Constitution of the North American Federation enters into force as the basis of law. This constitution:

– Establishes a National Politburo that convenes every eight years to elect a new president, removing the popular vote from any consideration. Elections are attacked as “bourgeois sham democracy” on the basis that they inherently favor the wealthy and well-connected.

– Abolishes the House of Representatives and establishes the Senate as the People’s Senate, whose members are nominated by local Party cadres.

– Places all agriculture, banking, resource extraction, and heavy industry under state control.

– Forbids discrimination on the basis of race, sex, religious background, or family pedigree.

– Bans organized religious bodies and requires that all educational institutions promote atheism.

– Places social and economic equality as a top government priority.

[Mrs. K: You forgot a very important piece of information: Grant Norman became President after the war.]

1955: According to the First Five-Year Plan of the North American Federation, public works projects speed along the recovery of the American economy. Most of the middle and upper classes are drafted into work teams.

1956: The government purges La Cosa Nostra.

1958: The People’s Senate holds a debate on which of the two superpowers — the Empire of Japan or the German Kaiserreich — to ally with. Also, they release a statement criticizing Trotsky’s ideas of world revolution, saying that every country will achieve socialism in its own way.

[Mrs. K: It’s bad form to cram two unrelated things together like this. The statement about world revolution shouldn’t have been put there — it muddles things.]

1959: The National Politburo selects Armin Nestor as the new President.

1960: After two years of deliberations, the NAF government chooses to align itself with Germany because so many Americans have German ancestors, and German-speaking communities were more common back then. But there was a pro-Japan faction too. It wanted to ally with Japan because they were non-European and therefore more revolutionary since Europeans dominated the world for centuries.

[Mrs. K: You’re forgetting that German-Americans played a decisive role in furthering the socialist revolution. Also, don’t begin sentences with conjunctions.]

1962: Two important things happen:

– The Heirs of Lincoln, the STP’s most radical wing, used its control of the education system to turn young people against the Party leadership. Its leader, Jonas MacGruder, said that allying with Germany was “a counter-revolutionary embrace of the long-standing European dominance over global politics” and would undermine the core STP doctrine of racial equality.

– A group of Yale students allied with the Heirs of Lincoln forms the Enlightened Youth of the Shining Tomorrow (EYST) to defend the primacy of the proletariat and suppress reactionary thinking. Both the Boy Scouts and the Girl Scouts were integrated into the EYST, getting rid of them as independent organizations.

1963: With the Heirs of Lincoln helping them, huge riots hit every major city as EYST blueshirts (named for the blue T-shirts they often wore) humiliate everyone with authority, from Party officials to their own parents. Any police who acted against them were punished. Former US government buildings like the White House, the old Congress building, and the old Supreme Court are destroyed, Mount Vernon is burned, and many statues of old American heroes are damaged or knocked down. Current Party policy has its roots in the MacGruder era.

[Mrs. K: That final statement is unnecessary, and you should really be careful when making claims like that. Most people associate MacGruder’s Coup with communism, and the current Shining Tomorrow Party is very much against that doctrine, as is the Empire of Japan.]

1964: The North American People’s Army is unable to restore order since it’s too disorganized and undisciplined (they purged a lot of experienced US Army officers) and much of the EYST was armed. Grant Norman is placed under house arrest, and Jonas MacGruder took over. He brought about full communism, abolishing all private property and banning religion outright. He even replaced local police with EYST activists. President Nestor is assassinated.

[Mrs. K: That parenthetical statement is not good; you should’ve mentioned that important detail earlier.]

1965: Disgusted by this turn of events, the German government withdraws all diplomatic contact with the NAF.

1967: The Japanese forces invade the NAF and overthrow MacGruder. They then execute him and his administration. However, they keep the Shining Tomorrow Party in power to maintain some stability. But some believe that MacGruder was secretly paid by the Japanese to mess up relations with Germany on purpose and give Japan a free hand in the NAF.

[Mrs. K: Leave unfounded conspiracy theories out of your work. I will deduct an entire letter grade just for this.]

1969: Grant Norman dies of a stroke.

1970: A new constitution is proclaimed, repealing not only MacGruder’s policies, but those of the preceding Norman Regime as well. Anti-discrimination law is stricken from the criminal and civil code, economic liberty is placed above economic equality, and private property is restored, with people whose property was expropriated getting generous restitution. But two other things happened as well:

– Women were permanently expelled from the Party.

– The EYST was split into two groups: The Stalwart Youth (SY) for boys, and the Young Elegant Ladies of the West (YELOW) for girls. The SY would act as a reserve officer training corps in the high schools and colleges, while YELOW would perform humanitarian work and teach young children while learning to be good wives and mothers, a role they have even in modern times.

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Shining Tomorrow Historical Lore (Part 1)

This series of posts will detail the backstory of the setting of my upcoming novel, Shining Tomorrow. This backstory is not needed to understand the novel; it is only posted as a supplementary bonus.

Part 1: The Late United States Period (1914-1950)
Part 2: The Norman Regime and the MacGruder Coup (1951-1970)
Part 3: The Rise of the White Nationalist Movement (1971-2015)
Part 4: World War III (2015-2020)
Part 5: Morning in America (2021-Present)

YOUNG ELEGANT LADIES OF THE WEST (Eugene V. Debs High School chapter)
Historical research assignment
DUE DATE: October 16, 2052

As members of YELOW, you are responsible for guiding the next generation in the right way and safeguarding the future of the North American Federation. As the poet William Ross Wallace once said, “the hand that rocks the cradle rules the world.” Thus, every YELOW girl should have a thorough understanding of our country’s history.

To that end, I want you to write a timeline of NAF history, starting from the beginnings of the Shining Tomorrow Party in the old United States to the current day. The assignment must be typed and written in complete sentences. Spelling or grammar mistakes will count against you.

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